能帮忙改一下英语作文吗？{主题是我认为大学生毕业早工作是对的的表述}非常感谢

更新时间2018-09-03 19:39:23

As a college student ,I think really work is a important chance to make yourself well. Taking a job in a company is very important to college student know many knowledges that they can’t learn in college classes.

In China,many college students only know books’ knowledges ,they don’t know more really knowledges in society. So they are lacking of society ability .When they come to society early, they will be good to use their books’ knowledges in society .There are many knowledges that you don’t learn in school.

So college students are taking a job in company early is a good choice in their life.

按原文意识，稍作语法改动的英语范文如下：

As college graduates, I think that to grasp the job as early as possible is an important opportunity to fit them well in the society. Engaging in the job with the companies is very crucial for the college graduates to yield quite a lot of working experience and field knowledge that the college graduates have never had to deal with before in the college studies.

In China, many college graduates are merely academic on book knowledge, and they don't get in touch with more aspects of practical knowledge in the society. So they are lacking in the ability of the social practical experience. When they step into the society to work, the earlier they touch the society, the earlier they could execute their book knowledge in the society. It is always realistic that there are lots of practical experiences that they have never learned in school.

In conclusion, college graduates engaging themselves in the jobs with companies as soon as possible would have the fantastic outlook for their life.

附中文翻译本供参考：

作为大学毕业生，我认为尽早掌握那工作是一个重要的机遇，让他们好好的融入社会。参与公司的工作是非常关键的为大学毕业生获取相当多的工作经验和领域知识，那是大学毕业生从前在大学的研习里，从来没有经历探讨过的。

在中国，许多大学毕业生仅仅是理论的书本知识，他们不涉猎社会里更方面的实务知识，因而，他们缺乏社会实践经验的能力。当他们踏入社会工作的时候，那他们越早接触社会，那他们就越早可以运用他们的书本知识于社会中，这永远是现实的，这有很多的实践经验，他们从来没有在学校里学习得到了。

综上所述，大学毕业生尽早投身他们的工作于企业，定会为他们的人生取得那美好辉煌的展望。